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AUGUST 5, 2012 8:25PM

4th Gallery Challenge: Trees Unraveling

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unraveling

(Wikepedia)

Flayed, frayed,

crinkling,

curling,

dying,

only to be reborn;

Unveiling smooth

flesh

beneath.

Thoughts abound;

Curl around;

Rejuvenate,

then dissipate.

Like wind blown branches

high above.

Only to begin anew.

Born again

Dropping excess

baggage

with deep

cavernous

breadths

and a sigh;

Free of burdens –

of my mind.

Until,

the unraveling

begins

anew.

I try to clutch,

seize,

grapple,

hold -

the peeling bark.

Smoothing,

begging,

pleading,

crying,

calling out.

Not again.

Don’t fall apart.

But the cycle

takes over,

as is meant

to be.

The shedding of old

skin

begins.

Must this continue?

Perhaps to the top

I can

climb

in my mind.

Where the leaves

are ever green

and do not shed

as the bark below.

I get so tired of

Unraveling

* the Pacific Madrone

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This is a "Repost" from March 2011. I had one of these in my backyard and watched it completely unravel only to start all over again. Fascinating.
Excellent. The words unraveled down the page too and I followed them the way you would something falling from a tree. Nice.
Thank you niles. I appreciate your coming & reading.
Every once in a while, I get jealous of your twin grandbabies...and then I see you write...and it DOES NOT HELP MY JEALOUSY!!!!!

LOL!

Love this, my friend!
What a great metaphor for all life. I really like this.
A lot more unraveling than the tree in this poem. Love that photo!
Yes. The Pacific Madrone, sheds like the Sycamore, Platanus occidentalis, both are messy exfoliators indeed. Like our skin it comes back again and again, a miracle indeed. It still is one of my favorites because of the wonderful color show. Great Poem T.
Oh JD. you've nothing to be jealous about. I've read your writing...and my grandbabies came maybe a bit too early...ha...your's will be right on time.
Thanks MH. I really appreciate it.
Zanelle...Not to worry. It's not me.
tg: Thanks for the comment. Yes, it is a mess but fascinating none the less.
Hey, Scyalla. Wasn't I just talking to you? ha.
Thanks for coming by
You only need ONE grandbaby...right?
I promise to take real good care of the other...feed that baby boiled peanuts and root beer!!!! LOL
Loved the words, the vividness of the process, the photos. So many parallels to our lives. Thank you!
Trilogy, I had never thought that trees change their surface...the unraveling...and such a strong symbolism in your words...so true...I too get tired of unraveling...thank you for this!! Beautiful work.
Beautiful, Tril, and a perfect analogy for all life.
Beautiful, I’m glad I got a second chance to enjoy this one, thank you
~R~
[r] trilogy, this is wonderful. the picture made me blink, the colors were so light like crepe paper decorations for a children's birthday party. The curling of the bark so incredible. Love the image of the tree itself. Love the celebration of the smooth trunk beneath the curling bark and your line length and rhythm reflect the whole natural process. Delicious!! And then when you launch into the metaphor of one's own shedding of bark and vulnerability with that change it really becomes all the more exciting. The quest to rise to shedless leaves. I love the last "I get so tired of unravelling!" Wow. Keeps it all so down to earth wonderful! Bravo! best, libby
This post has won a Readers' Picks Award.
Wow - thanks for the Readers Pick! Poetry would never get an EP! And Libby, your comment blew me away. thank you for the very kind words.