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ehh....what town in Italy is your family from?

toritto

toritto
Location
tampa bay metro, Florida,
Birthday
September 10
Bio
I was born in year 4 of the reign of the Emperor Tiberius Claudius and raised on 66th Street and 13th Ave. in Brooklyn. And Coney Island, Traveled the world. Married my high school sweetheart and stayed together 40 years. Now a retired old widower crank living in Florida with my cat. Author of "Initial Verses" - a collection of poems on love, loss, poverty and war" and "Toritto's Blog - a Memoir of a life in posts."

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JUNE 8, 2012 5:35PM

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How to Write about Africa (with apologies to Binyavanga Wainana) 

Lithe and lovely

Eritrean girl

high cheek bones

pearly whites

chocamocha

café latte

has me staring at her

aquiline nose.

 

"Hey G. I!

You buy hashish today?"

Smoke rings and purple haze

scotch and water

tobacco and hash

I take the pipe.

she takes the glass

 

Slow dancing

hits and sips

mouths exchanging intoxicants

taking off the edge

softening the focus

gettin in the mood

curfew’s passed

I'm staying the night.

 

It's a high

exploring each other

smoke touching me

lips on her body

‘till fingertips uncover

missing pieces.

 

Scars and cuts

mutilations

bud nipped from

a stunted flower.

How does man maim

God’s perfection?

 

Will she stare at the ceiling

if we love

looking for cobwebs to dust

in the morning?

Going through the motion

sipping on her drink?

 

It is not a night for love

or caressing scars.

Instead a night for a purple dream

to forget what I have seen.

She smiles as I pass the pipe

and take her glass.

 

Originally published in fictionique

http://fictionique.com/?p=13942

photo: Hornlight.org

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Poignant, Toritto. Cuts through the heart.

R♥
Whoa... did you actually go through that night? Politically correct calls for change are one thing, touching the reality is an all together different experience. Excellent post that brings it all home.
jmac - I was in the army in Eritrea in the early sixties - I was about twenty and knew little about the local culture.

I found out. This boy never forgot.
Beauty meets the hideous and carries the reminder of what some are. Soft to jagged, like life often is. Thank God for drugs and alcohol.
A hard night of the soul.
Rated.
What a powerful and beautiful poem.
The photo is mesmerizing
rated with love
Maybe not a night "for" love

Definitely a night "of" love
.
Didn't you just post this like a week ago?

It's still good, but am I just hallucinating from the hash hish in your poem?
--r--
duniteowl - no it's not the hash. I did post it on one of those days when only you and a couple of others read it. We all have those days. I was also having trouble getting on O/S and I'm sure others had difficulty as well.

Since it's Friday night and I plan no posts until next week I thought I might put it up again.

I'm proud to say that on Fictionique it got over 12,000 hits. Pretty nice!

:-)
Exquisite and painful. /R
I remember this one.
Thought I saw this before but it's just as good now as it was then. r
Your sublimated anger washes my eyes and questions my soul, sunlight and wilderness birds alive, photosynthesis quakes and lustful leaves vibrant to the new day.
Your sublimated anger, toritto, toritto!
Blown away here T.. excellent..
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