I
The biting wind struck Maeve’s frail body with force so she drew her mother’s thin red shawl around her shoulders tighter. She shivered remembering what she had done. The stunning ring had been lying on Mrs. Carver’s bedside table along with her yellowed false teeth which floated in a glass of water. She moved the tumbler and dusted, then slipped the ruby ring into her pocket.
Trudging home on the icy path through the shadowy forest, the weight of the stone spun the ring around her thin finger. When the vagrant grabbed her from behind, it flew into the gloom.
II
After a long cold winter, sun-filled days thawed the frozen earth and birds migrated back from their winter respite. A squirrel sprung from his warm leaf-lined den in the trunk of an ancient oak. With pangs of hunger he dove to the forest floor and dug for buried acorns. A bright glint like crimson berries caught the attention of his black beady eyes and he hopped through the decomposing leaves hoping for an edible treasure. Cocking his head to one side he gazed at the ruby ring. An ebony crow swooped down and snatched it up with its hooked beak.
III
“What are you afraid of Chelsea? Ghosts?” Jack taunted. Mary and Thomas giggled, but the tales about the woman in the woods and the thought of meeting down there at midnight to have a séance made her flesh crawl.
The moon hung like a fingernail clipping over the old Carver house where the remaining shards of glass in the windows seemed like a menacing grin.
The rhythmic crunching of their footsteps on the path into the dense forest kept time with the banging in her chest. Jack found an old oak and the four friends settled underneath its gnarled branches.
IV
Maeve floated through the forest on the wings of the gust’s frosty breath twisting with the wailing wind. Like so many nights before this, she found herself on that muddy path with the ruby ring heavy on her finger like the weight of guilt on her soul. Sometimes she caught glimpses of others completely unaware. Other times they seemed alarmed then faded into the gray snowy night.
Tonight the pull at her core caused a ferocious velocity of writhing. She whipped towards the foursome dislodging something from the old oak which fell between them.
“Return it!” Maeve howled with wind.


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Involving and immediate. rated.
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that it would determine events in the spiritual world.
The squirrel description says it all...
that it would determine events in the spiritual world.
The squirrel description says it all...
Thank you so much Linda! Wouldn't that be great and a record breaker!!!!
wonderful!!
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Thanks Sarah! I walk through it in mind and it keeps getting darker and darker......must be because Halloween is around the corner!
I am glad Sheila, but most likely the tale will have to go on in our imaginations!!
Mary I have my book club reading a few of my tales for my haunted meeting next month!! I wonder what they will think????
The video reminds me of a night sail my husband and I made from Grenada to Trinidad a few years ago, except there was no land in sight. We were all alone on the open sea when a bird exactly like the one in the video hopped onto the stern and hitched a ride with us for some miles.
Two of my favorite line- "moon hung like a fingernail clipping" because that evoked GAG in me and then the moon was gross in my mind. "shards of glass...like a menacing grin" was like a double dose of eeriness.
I'd love to write like you. It was smooth and built up at the right place.
Wow Kate! You made my day!!!
Of course, the venerable OS has been so slow for so long - I may have altered my metabolism by now.
R
Thank you!
Wow! Thanks MC!
Mango so nice of you to stop by and leave such a generous comment!
You left an awesome comment. Thank you!
I hope your metabolism gets back to normal soon!!! hahaha!
R
Thanks Ash! I love Poe. Now that I am writing these scary tales it has crossed my mind to do a short story book! You never know......