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Sparky Dashforth

Sparky Dashforth
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I am a published poet willing to create an OS blog for the sheer joy of sharing and connecting with other poets. Please feel free to contact me regarding poetry in general, poems and poets. I am also a hobbyist photographer. All the images (unless otherwise stated) are my own and may not be copied or distributed without permission.

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AUGUST 8, 2012 2:21PM

On Blennerhssett Island with Walt Whitman

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 Walt Whitmen Poem
 
He sat on this patch of turf,
and if not this exact place
a piece of a place nearby.

Naturally I try to feel his companionship.
Did he write a line of poetry
on this small island
or was he simply being Walt Whitman,
honored guest,
a person he hardly recognized
from his youth?

I feel his old bones not his youthful step
but also his long poems
as they ride Ohio river currents
at ease with the next slow bend,
or some quick kink and churn 
of its flowing history.

I imagine his hand on the ground,
it heaves my body up from a deeper grass.
A turf that parcels our presence,
it quilts me to a terrain
where fingers meet on a shared wrist
a place where heron wings beat.

I feel the mutuality of crossed roads,
the cadency of shore eddies
as they unbutton a coat
that he left draped over the rail
of this wooden jetty.
 
 
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Seems we're both in a reflective spot this day. Amazingly I accomplished much, much against my will but I feel better for it. A lovely trip you've taken me on. :)
The photograph is wonderful accompaniment to this rich poem. The reaching across in time, through all that land and water. Lovely.
Wonderful...I did a play years ago and my character would wake up from a kind of coma and declaim, "Walt Whitman was a great man!" It always got a reaction.
Walt and I ride the surf together, whenever I ride the waves I think of Walt and how he loved the sea too..
This was so melodic and a little more sentimental in some ways than your poems I have read, I kept waiting for a zinger, as you have a habit of doing. I liked this tone and flow very much.
Many thanks for the great comments guys!
I love this poem of connection. Thank you especially for these stunning lines: "his long poems/as they ride Ohio river currents
at ease with the next slow bend".