Hereafter, Charlene referred to, as I.
My friend Dana and I sat in the backseat of the Rambler as we drove along the winding shoreline of Lake Erie. I was wondering if she felt as stoned as I did. Unless you knew her really well, she was quite shy. Dana and I were closer than sisters; born with almost the exact birthdates, she was two days older than me.
I rolled down the car window. You could almost smell the heat of the day. It was a short drive until we parked the car near a stand of poplars and there was still a jaunt to the beach. Along the way we passed a fruit orchard by the roadside and my brother reached up and grabbed some peaches, tossing one to each of us.

We walked a narrow path uphill to get to the lake where sandy loam eventually gave way to sinking sand. My senses were distorting ... there looming ahead was a Lake Erie sandhill. To me it had the drama of the Sahara dessert.
What had started out as a head buzz moved into a body stone. As a petite sixteen year-old, my legs felt they had the weight of an elephant with every move. Focusing my eyes on the apex of the dune, every step sunk me deeper into the sand. It didn't help that vertical heat waves were emanating off the sand which was scorching to the touch. Each step I took closer seemed to move the horizon further away. I thought I’d never make it to the top.
Rod and his friend were much stronger and climbed the dune light-years ahead of us. We watched both males disappear over the dune to the left. I knew best to go to the right. Rod would give us a shout before they left – after all he wasn’t at the beach to hang out with his kid sister.
Struggling through the sand, Dana and I held hands, and with each other's help, we finally made it to the top. Our efforts rewarded; Paradise waited on the otherside. We ran down the hill sliding in the sand, our high voices reverberating off the land and water.
You see, this was back in the day when the Lake belonged to no one and everyone; and when a working family could live on lakefront property. Smaller homes and winterized cottages dotted the shoreline; some were respected rustic properties, others wind battered. Both gave way to one of the few lakes in the area you could still swim in.
Dana and I found our spot in a little alcove close to the water with a bit of shade from a nearby tree. We spread our blanket out gingerly removing our t-shirts and cut-offs, fearful of others watching then laid down in our bathing suits. I could already feel the high sun sizzling on my skin deep into my bones. We slathered sun tan lotion over each other as a slight breeze blew in off the lake.
I shared my secret with her about the dancing plant and we laughed so hard our faces hurt.
She pushed me playfully,
“Get out!! Plants don’t dance!” she said.
“Well this one did!” I said pushing her back.
“Did not,” she said.
“Did so!!” I said.
Giggling we both tumbled off our blanket onto the warm sand till our bodies were covered like cinnamon sugar cookies. We howled, and ran into the water to let the cool lake wash over us.
After swimming, we laid back on our towels. I watched the water droplets evaporate off my skin.
“The peaches!” I said remembering and reaching into my knapsack.
“Not a moment too soon. My throat is parched.” Dana said.
Handing one to her, we both sat staring at the perfect fuzzy fruit. My salivary glands gushed in my throat at the sight of it. With a mutual glance we simultaneously bit into the succulent flesh of the freshly picked ripe peach. Juice ran down our chins. Flavour exploded. It was the most exquisite taste I have ever had up to that point in my life. Or since.
We spent the rest of the afternoon watching the sun shine like diamonds on the water. For a second I felt the universe smile upon us. Some folks came and set up a blanket nearby playing Pink Floyd from their cassette player until the batteries wore out.
What goes up must come down.
We sat on the beach and watched the orange pink July sun set until my brother called our names and we trekked back descending that dune.
The herb wore off but the memories of the day I discovered the secret nature of plants has stayed with me. It was truly a defining moment in the summer of my youth.
All things come to pass.
Those dunes have all but vanished now too; carried away by bulldozers when rich American bankers came in offered those families deals they couldn’t refuse. Cookie cutter McMansions now replace those unique cottages. No one realized they would restrict access to the lake like they fucking owned it too.
And my best friend Dana? She died after a brutal battle with a rare form of cancer in 2004.
What I would give to have a little slice of that 70's afternoon back again.
© Scarlett Sumac 2012. Part I found here.


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Scarlet Sumac . . .
I was reminded of `Nags Head Sand Dunes.
I had a black 'Renault' Dauphine four-door.
Gears grind, block-head was badly cracked.
`
I carried a gallon jug of water everywhere.
It had to be 'kicked-started' with pushes.
The auto-starter always malfunctioned.
I do Love that song you etc., pick out.
Maybe you will receive a EP and harp.
I remember the sand-fleas always bit us.
Sand Dunes are beautiful Natural beauty.
Thanks for a trip back to the seventies.
Life is brief
Beach Fleas
Sure do itch
`
Also very sorry you lost a friend. Fuck cancer!
"What goes up must come down". The story came an ending and so sad about Dana.. but you had me up the whole time and god yes I wish we could back even for a brief moment in time.
HUGGGGGGGGGG
Art James: Welcome soul. I'm googling Nags Head Sand dunes, right now. Life is brief; youth a fleeting second ... I see you driving your four-door Renault with jug of elderberry wine too.
I have ever had up to that point in my life. Or since.”
Rather a lovely piece, mz. S…
Somehow it is reverberating metaphorically for me, up the dune, the boys to the right, the girls to the left, who knows what those boys up to, but certainly big brother will come back to get us while we , uh, nymphs go and get some good vibes from the sun and the water and the proximity of each other, two young gals climbing youth’s staircase hand in hand…
“What goes up must come down…”
Youth ascended, we stand up there on the shaky scaffold, and find a hangman’s noose waiting for us. We willingly submit our necks. The execution is long & drawn out,but we never lose hope someone will jump in and save the day like in a corny movie…cut the suffocating rope…swoop us up…away…
The rope is not hemp…ha
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“the herb wore off but the memories of the day
I discovered the secret nature of plants
has stayed with me. It was truly a defining moment in the summer of my youth.”
Defining how? You saw that life could be good. That there is a hidden secret layer, no…layers upon layers…of life out there, beyond the focal gaze we are hypnotized into affecting…
Verbal expression is the hero. The one that cuts the rope.
cinnamon sugar cookie tumbles to the sea...
tu amigas, bella tesoro
tresure of gold, silver, oro
...your voice and lyrics here, so graceful and wrenching ~
*tu amiga
James, Sorry to be such a Buzzkill!! I know ... up and down, hill and valley, innocence and experience, dry and wet, health and sickness, sun high, sunset. The "defining" is for the reader to figure out ... which I believe you did, my friend.
A fitting ending to your "stoned soul seaside picnic" . The part of the lake I grew up near had no beach to speak of; if we wanted to swim we had to go to a place called Headlands which would have been the perfect name for the beach in your story! You brought back wistful 70's memories for me with this sweet little slice of life; thanks for that. And so sorry about Dana - were you two friends through all those years? If so how wonderful. I lost touch with mine ages ago.
So sorry about your friend.
Never anticipated all the fun my last little post would generate. All good memories of great times... times long past when the world itself was more, much more, fresh and, well, innocent. Damn the American bankers and so sorry Dana had to go that way.
Margaret: I wanna hear about your Headlands! Dana (not her real name) and I (not Charlene either) knew each other from age eight to 43. We didn't have a falling out, let's just say someone - whose name I don't speak out loud - put a wedge between us for a couple years, in our early forties. We did thankfully, reunite, before she died. Sad.
Abra: Ha! You and tr ig both ... I tell ya ... You both need to eat some Space Cakes. ;)
Luminous: Not that I would know .... maybe every subsequent high is trying to get back to the original state. ;)
phyllis: Yes, I was very, very fortunate to have such a playground so close. Thank you for stopping by.
Catch-22: Hmmm, thanks for suggesting it, I think OS has had enough of this tho'. Two SS blogs in 2 days! Eek!
“I know ... up and down,
hill and valley, innocence and experience,
dry and wet, health and sickness,
sun high, sunset. “
the ups and downs don’t stop after Youth’s brief apprenticeship.
They simply gain ‘patterns’ .
We are mothers to ourselves, fathers to our selves forever, maybe…
The "defining" is for the reader to figure out ...
which I believe you did, my friend.
I suppose maybe. Definition is temporary, always. The Fluid Pen of the Artist on High is always in motion, eh?
For me, 'twas less about the secret life of plants than about getting into the inside of things and possessing with all 4 f'ing eSSSeS , sadly, that which, with time, we learn we can only possess with memory and in finitude.
So very fine. Thanks and
Saludos too~
You know those kids playing the Pink Floyd had to be stoned when they left the house -- otherwise they'd have gotten extra batteries.
Well you wore out your welcome with random precision,
Rode on the steel~~ breeze.
Come on you raver, you seer of visions, come on you painter you piper you pauper and Shine!
--r--
Seriously, I remember places like that, SS. We both love the same lake (albeit at different ends), and I'm sad to see how access to the beaches has been so restricted all along it. But we're lucky. A five-minute drive takes us to a pristine half-mile of sandy shoreline that's part of a conservation area and wide open to the public. Beauty.
to kissing... I knew it!
Your mentioning lake cottages makes me wonder about the area I hung out in on Lake Erie, with rustic cottages all along the shore, on the road from Leamington to Point Pelee, I think that's where I was...I loved those little funky spots, those barbeques and tons of drinking...never could keep up with those Canadians and the drinking. Not one smoked pot. That I did I kept a secret when visiting Canada, my then boyfriend would have been horrified.
Thanks for writing a double post about your first high, I thoroughly enjoyed.
So many great visual descriptions here, especially "covered like cinnamon sugar cookies."
"... when a working family could live on lakefront property": Wow, you're dating yourself with that line. Was that really possible once, or just a dream?
Yes...cookie cutter real estate realities and the passing of both time and friends. Thanks, designanator.
inthisdeepcalm: Realistic time lines were a little slower, weren’t they? I had enough Pink Floyd those summers on the beach to last a lifetime – this song was fitting for many of that time who have since lost friends along the way.
Inverted: Trying to translate your “4 f’ing eSSSes”… I think I get it but I’m not sure. In finitude and solitude maybe too. May your ship sail on a soft wind.
dunniteowl: Hello! True (and funny) enough about the batteries but you know, it’s sometimes hard to tell how much “energy” the energizer bunny has left. Played that record a bit yourself, did you?
Spud: Glad to bring back the memories of the Secret Life Of Plants. I only read a few excerpts from it but I stared at it a lot. ;) And yes, the 1st post was more “successful” – didn’t have the downer ‘real life stuff’ like gobbled up real estates and friends.
BO: I am waiting for your contribution to his OC. Far Out, Maaaaann. You were probs too good to get involved in such tomfoolery. You know, I’m on the ‘other’ lake now (it’s practically in our backyard) … the one you can’t swim in and is often referred to as a “chemical sink.” Along Erie down Lowbanks way and beyond there is still a wide swatch of shoreline accessible. My old stomping grounds though … I cat even get on that patch of sand. Damn. Well, I could (that is, I tried) but someone tried to would sic (?) a big watch dog on me.
tr-ig: I have considered writing that kind of titillating prose, there may at least be some money in it, perchance … ;;
Just Thinking: Thank you. I wasn’t the only women folk out there was I? Seemed at the time there were quite a few sisters about. If you want hard drinking folk … go to the Maritimes. I think they’ve got the monopoly on drinking people under the table. On second thought, you might wanna stay away. ☺ My Lake Erie summers were more to the east but the funky spots and cottages most likely looked the same to the ones you describe.
Thank you Damon, for both you comment here and the previous one about Bowie and the bride for the TPB – that made me laugh. That was nice about my friend. I hope she is surrounded. Can you conjure up some more Miss Crimson some time soon, please!
VA: Well, I guess I truly am dating myself. I’m trying to not identify exactly where (you can guess why): I’m referring to a town with a population, in those days, of 17,000. There were a number of stately places but there were the tiny home cottages too. Hard to believe, I know. Yes, bodies slathered with Tropicana Tanning oil, just add sand. Bake cinnamon cookies at 350 for 45 minutes. If you come down this way, we’ll go on a drive, K?
Pffffffft. Although I have to admit, it was more likely booze, at least most of the time. My brother just gave me a photo from the family archives showing me on my motorcycle circa 1981. I'd not only forgotten the trip on which it was taken, but even what I was doing there. What an unsurprise.
Sometimes English looks so odd to me. I had to look up the spelling of 'possess'. Apparently you need all four of those eSsess in order to really really possess something, in writing anyway... in English...
(btw how to pluralize the word for 'S' ??? ok, now I'm getting confused!)
This writing of yours reminded me of that of Françoise Sagan, beautiful... just beautiful, and more.