The Poor Woman's Almanack

"..While I pondered, weak and weary..."

Poor Woman

Poor Woman
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Colorado, United States
Birthday
April 29
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Social Reformer
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6 Word Bio: RUDELY AWOKEN-- MOSTLY OUTSPOKEN-- REMAINING UNBROKEN ****************************************** My life would shock most people. It is a little known fact that there are quite a number of those on the fringes who may not ever see relief. I am that one you never met, in that we are kept separate by way of societal demands that the poor remain silent, biddable, childlike nonentities without a say as to our care or how it's to be provided. ****************************************** I tend to view things as a selfdisicplined person without advantages. If this won't set with some, then I guess they are not ready to remember who we are as one entity, governed by everyone inclusively. I will not cease to point out any diseased thinking I run across here in the USA. ****************************************** I stand in defense of the weakened, the brutally treated, the denied, the ones for whom life's trial can be too much. I stand with my thought, even when my legs are weakened, my stride not strong. ****************************************** Walk with me on this journey, now, wherein we may ask each other: How much is the value of one person affected by what is generally assumed about them? **** See me also at THE POOR WOMAN'S RETROACTIVE DIARY, (go to LINKS below, if you're interested) a commentary on the level of care I was allowed throughout my time seeking help.

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MAY 23, 2012 7:20PM

Repost: (A 3 part) Poem: Why the Moon Still Cannot Sing

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Why the Moon Still Cannot Sing

 

 

The jars of the lover are filled up with sand

                             and the Moon doesn't sing anymore.

Its lyre is recovered in the desert. 

We discover that there are platelets in the Moon's surface

                              but these will never be recoverable.

Long though the dark has waged its battle behind the scenes,

                               there are still candles on the windowsill.

And all that can be undone isn't recoverable.

 

The platelets clash with our unreason;

                               they skim the surface with nobody watching.

Outwardly, the empty house is a haven,

                                but this will be on fire by the end of the week. 

Meekly, the road winds past our disaster;

                                in the final hours before dawn a fire is laid

                                  (so many flowers must be consumed by the doom factory)

 

All but recovered now, the platelets change

                                into the rucksack the Moon must carry. 

When it is Wednesday night, and our courage is empty,

                                who bars the window by the door?

In case we are not recovered, the old ways beckon

                                 while the mines lie fallow after sunset.

The river is unsettled; old ways carry a price,

                                  for their debt is our courage. 

If the tangled up lives of others are ours to pass by,

                                  our courage is the asking price.

 

By dawn, the old man's fingers sift through the lies

                                  our disaster has made.

In wonderment he must lie down and die.

Long though the dark has waged its war behind our gazes,

                                   the children know what mercy is for. 

 

 II

 

Two by two, on legs of stilts, they hobble onto pavement--

                                   their coin of passing is incompleteness--

             yet the mothers are unbearably wonderful works of art

             in a dream that is meant to go with them if they die.

Early on, it was decided how all the old women are unbearable.

If we sew their eyelids down, maybe they won't see us

                                    as forces of nature will,

                                    and notice each flaw above justice.

The breaking point is the mark on the skull between dawn and dusk.

Here's where brief courage might be found.

But the mothers are all silent now, gazing in intent

               upon that watchface nobody looks on without a tremor.

     Did you think it would last forever?

Take five.

The wonderments have not gathered their clothing about them

               and the coin of the hour is a full Moon face without character.

 

III 

 

The deftness of science needs a flipped switch.

And a miscarriage of justice is all in a day's work to the untold millions

               who've lost their verve on frozen lattes

                                      and a box full of empty promises.

 

You were the dragon tyrant who slew the ancient verse maker.

And in this mark you left upon Earth, there is no water.

                                       And no salt with which to view the Moon.

Breathe out.

The gallons still will flow,

                 and all stars can gather on the forehead on the seventh day.

 

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I found this while looking over all my old posts. Hope you enjoy!
PW
I have to read this a few more times- slowly, dear PW. But right away how this line resonates as my mind is too occupied with the subject:

"a miscarriage of justice is all in a day's work to the untold millions."

Thank you for digging it out and reposting.
R♥
I find here desperation and disappointment and total hopelessness. It is a fearful place to be.
I find here desperation and wild hopelessness, a fearful place to be.
We tend to relegate our poets to the back burner, to put science first, and beauty has even become a scientific stratagem, meant to "enhance," which ends by clouding over all female dignity until it ill becomes the mother figures of today. They must look like they're ready for sex, according to TV and video, etc. They mustn't look like moms or grandmothers.

Poets are almost like the tree in the forest when it falls.

Do we hear them any longer?

Peace, Jan and Fusie.
Thank you for joining me here.
swept away, far...
by the beautiful, priceless truth.

will nothing unspoiled remain
for innocent future eyes
to drown in.
Blessed are those who know that justice is truth. Powerful, relevant and well thought out, PW. Excellent post. R
Inverted: Thanks for the poetic response.
I love it when my guests add their own thoughts here poetically. It's a real thrill.
Wish I could rate yours....
Thoth: Thanks for the positive feedback. It's appreciated.