and if my thought-dreams could be seen

they'd probably put my head in a guillotine

Natalie Not Pedantic

Natalie Not Pedantic
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Australia
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November 01
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“If I lose the light of the sun, I will write by candlelight, moonlight, no light. If I lose paper and ink, I will write in blood on forgotten walls. I will write always. I will capture nights all over the world and bring them to you.” Henry Rollins ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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SEPTEMBER 23, 2009 6:21AM

Going Home

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The beach is her haven. Laying stretched out on her back, grains of sand massage her back as the heat of the sun penetrates her. She feels a pleasantly mild burning sensation on the delicate skin of her forearm as it rests lazily across her eyes, shielding them from the glare. A smile plays at the corners of her lips as she listens to the sounds of the waves crashing, teasing her gently with their promise of cool relief.


She stretches out, toes pointing to the ocean, arms above her head. Rising to her feet, she starts to run toward the water, a delighted laugh spilling forth as the water swirls around her feet. She waits, poised to dive into the next wave and when it comes she lets it embrace her, diving recklessly home.

 

*~*~*~*~*

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She's in the forest beneath a canopy of vibrant green. Cool, crisp leaves brush against her thighs as her bare feet move slowly along the narrow path. She smiles softly as the fresh air caresses her skin. As she draws closer, she can hear the sound of water beyond the birdsong and it's not long before she catches tantalising glimpses of the cave.

Soon she reaches her special place; a dark cavern where water cascades from an opening in the back of the waterfall. Although no sun visits here, the water gives up a welcoming light of it's own as she raises her arms above her head and dives. For a moment she is suspended in space before the cool, crystal water brings her home.

 

*~*~*~*~*~*

 

 

 

*photographs sourced from google images. The waterfall is a place here in Australia called Natural Arch. I spent more of my time here than in school during my teen years.

 

 

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I have heard of it Natalie. I envy you. Envy.
This is a smokin' piece you wrote.
SMOKIN'!
Well done Miss, beautiful imagery. The photos are nice too.
Awesome! I can see why you would care more about a place like that than you would algebra.
This is a water dance of words that evokes more than images. Beautifully rendered.
gorgeous # two. thank you.
Thanks for a poem I dare not jabber comment about. ref:`pain's release. There is a Welsh song. The women sings:`Where You o I will follow. I will find You if it takes one thousand years. She is at the H2O, water edge.
I once wrote on a pickup.
The truck was dented bad.
One day a few of us goofs?
Friends began writing with black magic markers on the pickup truck's tailgate, and above the back window brief 'sayings' ...

- Whoever led me here? Please lead me home!

- No money, common sense, no breaks on truck!

There were more bumper sticker cliches. Wreck!
This is how that truck conked . A 18 wheeler hit it!
Honest.
I was hit in the behind on the Potomac River bridge.
Th 18- wheeler was hauling Coors beer on I- 81 South.
My head bobbed back and forth and broke the window.
I was hauled to the emergency room. The trucker dozed.
This living on the Earth has been a trip. One day ~ a home.
Home.
This is home.
Where we are.
Natalie.
Not Pedantic.
Ya sheer joys.
Need a ride in a pickup truck? I promise to speed up and haul hay. Maybe I'll go 2- miles per hour? I promise to behave and stay alive, and practice kind compassionate? I promised to be somewhere @ 8!
Thank you for reading, Brian.

Mission, I didn't think anyone would have heard of Natural Arch, but it makes me feel good that you have.

Thank you, Mr Bobbot.

Michael, they were fun days. If I could go back, I'd spend a little more time at school though. Maybe...

Cartouche, that means a lot. Thank you. I was challenging myself to be a little more descriptive with my writing.

Arthur, I'd love to go for a drive in your pick-up.

Janie if you're every down this way, I'll take you for a swim at the cave.
Snaps! I felt the sun... I felt the water. ;)
oh my lord, nat. this is gorgeous. thank you for sharing and thank you for commenting on mr. e's post. that was extremely generous of you, considering. love love lvoe and gratitude
Beautiful, Natalie. I'm pretty sure I'll never get to the beach again, so a friend went not long ago and called me late at night and held up her phone so I could hear the surf. It was lovely. Your words here gave me the same feeling. I know that young woman. I WAS that young woman! Thanks for reminding me. Rated. D
I feel totally identified with those sensations you´ve described so well, with those feelings that sensations bring about... beautiful, exciting, peaceful, fantastic. I would have never been able to describe it all so well with my words. I LOVED this post, thanks, Natalie.
Super-mega-ultra rated!
Kisses,
Marcela
I would love to come visit your country. Australia seems to have so many gorgeous places.

Thanks, for the photos AND the prose. They go together like lover's hands.

Rated.
If I lived in Australia, I'd be there also. Very nice!
Hot and cool. Hope you keep writing these descriptions (and you know where you're always welcome on the web ;)).
Beautiful . . . just pure poetry.
Nat,
Nice stuff. You have a lot of range. girl.
Beautiful. This brought back memories of Crystal Cave, in the mountains of Southern Utah, where I went to High School. What an incredible place.
i love that this is "home." wish it was mine in a lot of ways : )
Beautifully done Natalie. The more creative writing you do the better you get; please write more.
You're painting with words here Natalie. Thanks for sharing these places with us:)
Thank you all for commenting. I debated with myself about posting this because I know it's cooling down up there in the Northern hemisphere. Your comments made me glad I did.
It does seem unfair that just as things are beginning to suck around here it's turning into summer Down Under. Please post more, pics, writing, what have you, about your beautiful country.
This is wonderful. You are becoming one of my favorite writers here on Open Salon; I hope you're not offended if I add you to my favorite's list.
Lovely use of imagery, sensations captured perfectly. Rated.
Great imagery. I feel refreshed.
Now this should be an editors pick. Amazing writing, sweetness.
Wow, that sounds beautiful.
I wish I could have been there. As a teenager, there was this little forested area I walked trails in, but I don't think it can compare to this. You have a unique talent for making the environment you write about seem to come to life.
Wow.

The words, beyond beautiful.

Rated.

(Slightly delayed, sorry!!! But here's T(ink)P(ick) to make up for it!!! ;) )
beautiful. majestic imagery.
I loved this.