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M. C. S.

M. C. S.
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For me writing is the best way to talk without ever being interrupted.................................. ©2013, M.C.S. - all rights reserved

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MAY 7, 2012 8:19PM

Long Night

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In the darkness

only the sound of the wind

breeze through the leaves

 

In the darkness

water trickles in the distant creek

as blood circulates through a body

 

In the darkness

far-off barking carried in the wind

lonely dogs don’t sleep

 

In the darkness

nocturnal creatures come awake

scurrying with wide open pupils

 

In the darkness

one lies awake listening to the wind

hoping for a miracle

 

In the darkness

there is only one image that of

hope teetering on the edge of despair

 

In the darkness

there comes a moment

when one feels consumed

 

In the darkness

one can seldom speak

for the tongue lies dry and flat

 

In the darkness

a recurring motion

of hands clasping and unclasping

 

In the darkness

prayers are started

but rarely completed

 

In the darkness

the echoes of time

become a burden  

 

In the darkness

one anxiously awaits the dawn

a reprieve from the darkness  

circleoflife 

 

 

 

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In the darkness
comes the dream
or nightmare
Only the dead
lie quietly

I am a different light
I am not afraid to fly
Stunning post. Stunning comments.
The burden of the echoes of time speaks.
It all speaks.
I like this confluence of posts, too.
I love the darkness and the healing it brings from the day's scorching realities. And I loved this poem.
Wow!
This grabs me!
May you find your light. You are an amazing person who shines brightly.
Written in a style I am growing very fond of.. you captured all the emotions of sleeplessness and worry. Blest be the day! Lovely.
In the light
Some of us wait
For the darkness to give us reprieve...
Be not afraid--
more than an exhortation to keep our emotions in check, it means, literally, do not allow your fears to become who you are; if it weren't for the night, there would be no point in awaiting the dawn.
So very descriptive and creative......R