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M. C. S.

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APRIL 24, 2012 7:30PM

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Flushed with the heat

of carnal hunger

white blossom 

 circleoflife 

 

 

 “If they substituted the word 'Lust' for 'Love' in the popular songs it would come nearer the truth.”
~ Sylvia Plath, The Unabridged Journals of Sylvia Plath

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White HEAT. Pure yet full of fire. Love it.
zanelle
April 24, 2012 11:09 PM
Oooh... I like this. Yes, that flush of heat that blossoms is, indeed, white.
The Songbird
April 25, 2012 07:06 AM
Such a way with words.
John A Bayerl
April 25, 2012 08:43 AM
Very good try..meaning felt.
cindy Prochnow
April 25, 2012 12:15 PM