hungry could use help
no pretense of will work
just matter of fact
black on limp cardboard
his clothes the color of earth
some stains as fresh as today
some as old as his eyes
his skeletal form sways
head hung
round shoulders and concave chest
like an S on the side of the road
a man trying to fold into himself
maybe it was his face
etched by brutal squint of sun
the shadow of brow
acrosss broken eyes
the scratch of callous
as one finger slid along
the contour of my hand
intimate, familiar
maybe it was his voice
too sane, too spotless
as he softly said
el sueño de la razón
produce monstruos
that made me understand
we are all as lost as he

Tasha Speaks
the worst part is it's never quiet
the sounds get inside your head
they rattle from lobe to lobe
forming patterns and circles and chains
last night we slept beneath the freeway
tightly tucked in the narrow place
between vibrating concrete
and dry coughing dirt
i hate the whoosh rush of cars
the rolling cooooorrrrrr of pigeons
asleep in the steel above our heads
Ole Boy says it sounds like a lullaby
to me it sounds like a song about sinners
played by the hands of a disappointed god



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coooorrr of pigeons, that S by the road, his folding in, the dry coughing dirt.
You know what to say, how to combine familiar words into new phrases, and when to stop. Lean lines, pinprick smart, lush undertows of compassion, oblique grief stripped of sentiment. Magnificent.
wonderful writing
we're either asleep together or awake together. no point in dressing it up.
etched by brutal squint of sun
the shadow of brow
acrosss broken eyes"
I see these people ever day and sometimes their broken eyes reach down to their soul.
May we just hope for some peace for them.
HUGGGGGGGGG
~R~
thanks, lorianne.
frosty funk (great name) - thanks. when i see them, i cant stop seeing them.
gerald - thank you & yes, it troubles me... s'why i name them.
larry - yup yup and so many monsters it seems
tool - thank you for taking the time to read. raw & pure, i like the ouch/ahhh of it.
inverted - respuesta perfecta
Eloquently described; two parts of a much bigger whole.
that is for damn sure! well,thank heavens we have each other.
other?
ha. what a farce,this idea of other
sentiment has its place, and should be brought out
only when you trust the person,i say!
reproduction of emotion is what needs to be done.
emotion is motion.
it flies by so quickly, or
it settles in for a cramp. a cramp in your soul.
exercise!
that is the thing to do..
uncramp! reason sleeps sometimes.we get unreasonably
alone.then what happens is our ears
get used to
"song(s) about sinners
played by the hands of a disappointed god"
ay.
the only solution i see is to get quiet. quietism?
"the worst part is it's never quiet
the sounds get inside your head
they rattle from lobe to lobe
forming patterns and circles and chains