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NOVEMBER 21, 2010 1:41PM

That Kiss- (JD's open call)

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Eyes closed and breathe heavy

Feel the tingling  swollen lips

 

It should have been him forever

 

Opening a door to real love

Closing out the truth

 

It could not be him forever

 

More than a simple kiss

To be loved for who I am

 

So lucky it was him, forever

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So sweet and melancholy. Everything a first kiss poem should be.
rated with love
RomanticPoetess
November 21, 2010 01:44 PM
Great remembrance. I don't remember my first kiss. But I do something else, and it happened in a junior-high corridor during class change. She was wearing a white sweater. Nothing's ever matched that thrill. But if she happens to read this, I apologize for my early piggishness.
Leon Freilich
November 21, 2010 02:04 PM
So lucky it was him forever

What a lovely thing to hold forever in your heart.

And this was lovely. Thank you!
Little Kate
November 21, 2010 02:12 PM
Lovely.. I could not write this..I stole my first kiss hands down
rated with hugs
Linda Seccaspina
November 21, 2010 02:40 PM
This is haunting...xox
Robin Sneed
November 21, 2010 02:44 PM
Romantic, thank you that means a lot coming from you
Leon; amazing how you remember her sweater ! :)
Kate; it really is a wonderful memory
Linda; Why does that not suprise me?
Robin; thank you , the memory haunts me still, so I'm glad it came through that way.
hugs, me
November 21, 2010 03:00 PM
Remember those eyes open! Hadn't thought about that in years. Thanks.
Mary Ann Sorrentino
November 21, 2010 04:00 PM
Very sweet....my lips like feel swollen from Collagen right now.
snarkychaser
November 21, 2010 04:26 PM
Sweet and beautiful. Thanks.
froggy
November 21, 2010 05:03 PM
Your 1st love..that is so cool! Loved this..sooo honest and pure, Mom always told me, "if they start breathing hard, get away fast!" lol( I was not even allowed to date till i was 17, then only livingroom dates! lol. This was a great poem!
cindy Prochnow
November 21, 2010 05:31 PM
Oh Hugs! I always feel your yearning in your poetry. R
Love Ya
Blu Speck
November 21, 2010 06:13 PM
Mary; you made me laugh
Snarkey;yeah but my memory is better:)
froggy;thx for stopping
Cindy; I've always had wonderful peole in my life
Blu; there are a few things I would love to re live...
hugs, me
November 21, 2010 07:59 PM
A bittersweet memory? Perhaps, but I am sure you are glad to have it.
Smithery
November 21, 2010 08:52 PM
Wow!
You deserve lucky...and I am glad you got it!

r
J D Smith
November 21, 2010 08:55 PM
Real love... that's worth a kiss...
askmeforwhatyouwant
November 21, 2010 11:34 PM
Sounds steamy. So many kisses have come to mind from my own past after reading this. Thanks for that...sigh...
Puddle Duck
November 22, 2010 07:59 PM
Too lovely, it made me wish I remembered mine.
l'Heure Bleue
November 22, 2010 08:22 PM
Everyone should have a first kiss like that. Worthy of being carried forever in memory.
Bellwether Vance
November 24, 2010 05:21 PM
joan; thx always love seeing you stop by
smithery; you are right on both
jd; thx you are sweet
ll2; exactly like I remember sweet
askme;worth so much...
puddles; I remember exactly how I felt after rather than during
l'huere; I'm sure you have many that keep you warm
bell; yes forever...
hugs, me
November 24, 2010 06:27 PM