JANUARY 10, 2012 8:17PM

Snow in the Suburbs

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I joined Open Salon finally after lurking around for almost a year reading some of the best poets that write here. I like poetry very much and more than half of my books are on poetry and poets. I don't write myself but I plan to use this as a place where I post some of my favorite poems that I read in the past and if someone else happens to read and like them too then that's just fine. I hope to post once a week. It would be nice to put pictures to go with the themes of the poems but I am new and I don't know how to do those things yet.  Thank you.

The first poem is by Thomas Hardy 
 
Snow in the Suburbs

Every branch big with it,
Bent every twig with it;
Every fork like a white web-foot;
Every street and pavement mute:
Some flakes have lost their way, and grope back upward, when
Meeting those meandering down they turn and descend again.
The palings are glued together like a wall,
And there is no waft of wind with the fleecy fall.

A sparrow enters the tree,
Whereon immediately
A snow-lump thrice his own slight size
Descends on him and showers his head and eyes,
And overturns him,
And near inurns him,
And lights on a nether twig, when its brush
Starts off a volley of other lodging lumps with a rush.

The steps are a blanched slope,
Up which, with feeble hope,
A black cat comes, wide-eyed and thin;
And we take him in.

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I like this poem because it has so many levels. It creates a beautiful and calm winter scene, but also in that calmness the poet introduces the idea of age and death through the skinny black cat which comes up the white slopes and we cannot refuse but accept him.

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So happy to see you here
I would love to see your favorite poems and poets here, poetry is my life and it is nice to find another fan of it. I am sure it is only a matter of time and you will be writing it too.
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Nice selection. Very appropriate for the mood of this middle of winter desert we are about to cross -- no turning back, right?
Your words have a flow, a cadence that should not be ignored. You will jump in with us: the water's delightful, you will find.

BTW, Romantic Poetess is from some other state of being; she has great, articulated passion. Enjoy!
Welcome to OS.
I’m delighted you came out to play.
I’m looking forward to your submissions.
Thank you for adding me to your list of favorites

Regards,

Mary
This poem has always been one of my favorites. Hardy created such an intimate ending, all of a sudden, by injecting "we" into what has up to now been a third-person observer's narrative. Suddenly, we are part of the poem with him - he could have said "I take him in," but that wouldn't have had the ambiguity that allows us to be part of it.
First, welcome! I think you will find pictures easy to include, it's one of the reasons I first joined.

The choice of poems was perfect for a January entrance into the fray. I liked it very much, and understood the taking in of the black cat.

Looking forward to seeing some poetry you write.
I love that you like levels!

Levels is one of my favorite words.
Nice reading before a fire, a big moon, a cold night, thanks.
Well, I'm so darn glad you decided to post after a year of lurking!

Welcome hilarad!

I enjoyed learning of Thomas Hardy's 'Snow in the Suburbs'. I liked the ending .... suddenly drawn into the poem and left with the feeling that I had been there all along but didn't know it until that moment!
hilarad, I am so glad you are offering to post and share the poems you love.
I was immersed in this one, thinking, Wait, this is so pure and innocent, not like Hardy...and then comes the black cat!
Your good, but still...let it snow let it snow, let it snow!
Thanks for the poem. I love poetry and will look forward to your posts!
Welcome to OS. It will be wonderful to read the selections you choose. R
Thank you for your warm welcome. I didn't expect to see all my favorite Open Salon poets here responding on my first post. I appreciate your encouragement and your input on the poem(s) very much.