Gwendolyn Glover

Gwendolyn Glover
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“Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover.” ~ Mark Twain * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * "Remember, remember, this is now, and now, and now. Live it, feel it, cling to it. I want to become acutely aware of all I’ve taken for granted." ~Sylvia Plath

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FEBRUARY 2, 2010 4:02PM

San Francisco (for the first time)

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I wrote this poem when I visited San Francisco during my spring break in 2003, which was when the US government "declared" war in Iraq.   

 

city lights and downtown heights. just
between you and me, i think this may
be close to home. (is it me or is this
city intoxicating?) i felt a twinge of hope
and desperation like pigeons' wings
(taking off.) when he called to me. to
anyone. (please.) i never saw so many
sinking into cement like the open jaws
of a desert monster. (crunch.) gaping
holes. no one pauses. "ignore-ance is
bliss," they say. but i would rather be
disturbed.

green apples. orange peels. daisies
in the night. between you and me is a
little thin air and a lot of weighted time.
silence is heavy like silver bullets hitting
the ground.

all around us is buying and selling and
eating and shitting and then what?

here comes the old question of "why?"
the duct-taped cardboard signs and
the good ol' red, white, and blue burning
in our ears. war breaks and clatters to
the pavement like an old alarm clock with
all the bells and whistles. i can't see
straight. the rain is soaking my prejudices
(and best-laid plans). i'm sighing of relief
when i smell the salty ocean. (what flavor
am i?) they say it's the only way but i only
know of oneand it doesn't taste like this.

falling in love is like this. i'm skidding
and sliding down a skid-marked, slippery
slope (stopping on a grassy knoll to read)
but the drum beats on and on and on.
("dance for us, won't ya, sistah?") i can't
dance. maybe, someday, i will. but for
now i'm going to bed. (after a cup of tea.)
good nite.
 

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I went a little crazy on the parentheses, didn't I?
(Parentheses are fun! Keep'em!) :-) besides without parentheses you can't make smiles :-)
Your poem hints of the beginnings of your love affair with San Francisco. You have an interesting juxtaposition (I love getting to use that word) between the thrill of being seduced (by a city in this case) and your objection to the war. (Parenthesis are meant to be abused)
Thanks, Stim! I was seduced by San Francisco and she's still got my heart.
Even your line breaks are evocative.

"silence is heavy like silver bullets hitting
the ground."

And do you dance now?
This was great. The first time I went to San Francisco I was amazed by this city by the bay. I drove my mustang, which was a 4 speed, with a clutch. I started going up that steep hill that curves and my clutch started slipping. I almost didn't make it. I had a great time! Great Poem!
This is very cool. I too love San Francisco. What a gorgeous city._r
Oh, yes, Owl...I do dance now! San Francisco changed my life.

You're brave, scanner. There's no way I would drive in SF.
Oh, yes, this is definitely San Francisco. Come and write about us any time.
Sirenita, I want to move back. I lived there for four years and it's my home.
San Francisco is a 'He'. Otherwise it would be Santa Francisca.

;-)
Number Two, San Franciso is probably a drag queen. (Aren't cities referred to in the feminine? Maybe I'm wrong.)
Nicely done, and no parentheses were abused in the making of this poem.
That's San Fran alright. Beautiful, Gwen, well done.
Rated.
Love this piece, with all its contrasts, about one of my favorite places.
Thanks, Pilgrim!

Thoth, I could write volumns of pages on San Francisco.

Thanks, Sophie, and nice to meet ya!
i love the parentheses (really i do)
that city is my goddess, my siren. i just can't get enough. i love your poem, gwen.
Lovely. thanks for sharing.
""ignore-ance is
bliss," they say. but i would rather be
disturbed. "

That's a line to savor!
This is San Francisco...I'm quite sure that it makes one feel whatever is going on more intensely...xox
Thank you! Thank you!

I love you guys!
Your writing is wonderful! And SF is a city to be loved! (Your poem recalled for me the "flower children" sitting on the sidewalks handing me daisies as a little girl! Good work, you!)