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Greg Correll

Greg Correll
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New Paltz, New York, US
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September 21
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Founder, Chief of Deselopy (small packages); Editor (doesthismakesense.com)
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small packages, inc.
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DECEMBER 27, 2011 11:40PM

bold daughters

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I like bold daughters who speak their mind,
make a firm declaration, and
strike out on their own road.

I like bold daughters who hesitate just enough,
daven just a little, to be balanced and nimble along the way,
to be sure-footed in the inevitable ruts and gravel and rain.

I like bold daughters who throw a sly look
to all who expect a fall.

Blahblah to old papas and cautious mamas
who forget, for foggy fear's sake: bold!

I like bold daughters who say with every breath:

I want the best, and forego all filler and fluff
until the best comes along or
I can make the best myself! 

I like bold daughters who need the best
like a brush needs paint,
like dead paper needs living green ink,
like an empty old plate needs a ripe new pear.

I love my daughters three,
bold and best they be, they be,
yesiree, yesiree!
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I like fathers who like bold daughters. They're lucky ladies.
I have two bold daughters in their thirties. I appreciate their spirit more and more as I get older.
joyous what a holiday gift this is, Greg! r.
I have one too, born from a not-so-bold mother. ~r
Your daughters are lucky to have a bold dad.
What a great fatherly sentiment you express here, Greg, and I like the definition of bold that you work out in the poem. Got a question, though, about the word "daven." Does it mean here "fawn-like"? I notice you use it in the context of strategic hesitation.
Thank you all! I notice this last week, with three grown daughters home, that each one has at least one Best they insist upon, and no one, not even mom and dad, can deter them. So good.
Jerry: daven is the rocking motion while praying that the chassidic Jews do in shul
Greg as to "daven", it means "to pray", and, yes, also refers, colloquially, to the rocking motion.
Hi Jon! you are correct of course.
Fine genes all around. Congrats, dad and mom. Ya done good.
beautiful, greg. Both the daughters and the poetry.
I am one.

I have one.

I like you!
What a wonderful tribute to your girls!
Boldness is emerging from the girlie here - it is great fun to watch.
Beautiful tribute to your daughters. I, too, have three...and now two more little bold granddaughters to watch grow.
Mine's 11, she's not yet bold. Let me know your secret, please. :)
I like my bold daughters, too, even if one is living in New York trying to make it as an artist. Now that's bold in this economy.