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femme forte aka candace

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Some believe in destiny and some believe in fate ---------------------------------------------------- I believe that happiness is something we create --------------------------------------------------- And you'd best believe that I'm not gonna wait ----------------------------------------------------------'Cuz there's gotta be something more ------------------------------------------------ There's gotta be more than this ---------------------------------------------------------- I need a little less hard time ------------------------------------------ I need a little more bliss ----------------------------------------------- I'm gonna take my chances ------------------------------------------- Taking the chance I might --------------------------------------------- Find what I'm looking fo-oo-oo-oo-or ------------------------------- There's gotta be something more -------------------------------------- ♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫♪♫ ♪♫•**•.¸♥¸.•*¨*•♪♪♫•**•.¸¸♥

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MARCH 10, 2011 10:52PM

making love standing up

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            “Would you like to dance?”

            Her friends were already on the dance floor.  She had tucked herself up onto the red Naugahyde booth and was wiping ice sweat off her half-empty glass.  She looked up to say no thank you, but his fingers were already curling around her palm, and before she she could speak, she was on the scuffed linoleum and had taken two steps in time to the beat, turning slowly clockwise with him, pausing, moving again.

            There was a respectable space between their belt buckles, her elbows tensed, his back straight.  Alison was singing a decent cover of Hearts In Armor, like she meant it for someone she’d once loved.

            He paused again and moved to lead her in the opposite direction, but she stumbled, stiff, and they lost the rhythm.

            “Sorry,” she said as she looked down at her rebellious foot.

            “It’s okay,” he smiled, squeezing her fingers and guiding her into a tight circle that drew her against his chest, flattening her breasts against his shirt pockets, his knee between hers.  They fit together like two halves of a locket.

            She bit her lip and felt his jaw tighten.

            He swallowed and said, “I always thought you were  …”

            “Shhhh,” she said, "it’ll be all right.”

            They danced, his fingertips on her ribs and hers in his hair, the music playing in their blood.

 

 

 

 
 
 

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Well this is different. And really romantic. A lot said with a little (is it autobiographical, by chance?) I especially liked the last line:

"They danced, his fingertips on her ribs and hers in his hair, the music playing in their blood."
oh my, i like that his hand was already on her wrist.
very romantic, that.
margaret, i used to write a lot of fiction here. some of it's still back there in the old pages. this was just for fun. and because i love romance. love love love it. ;

thanks, diana. i liked that, too.
You really did miss the old feller didn't you?

I like Fiction Femme.
The belt buckle image is wonderful. I love belt buckles.
Ooh! They could have danced all night! xox
I've said it before but it bears repeating: the path to the boudoir leads through the dance floor.

Wait, what?
well, abby, i sure miss dancin'. heh.

jess, so do i!! glad you came by, girl.

robin, you are so right. they could have. and i think they did. ;

truer words were never spoken. there is nothing sexier than slow-dancing. but only if the music isn't crap. then it's time to head for the back seat of the car. wait. how old am i?
Great stuff, but you're obviously a tease of the worst sort -- "I always though you were ..."

Were what!? Enquiring minds want to know!
Nothing like a Hallmark moment when you are sick.
Loved this
Rated with hugs and
tom, what do *you* think she always was, hmmm? go on, guess away. heh heh

linda, honey, if they put on hallmark what i think these two were gonna do next ... !!!@@!!! whoooo. so sorry you're sick :(
easy? graceful? stuck-up? unapproachable? a whore? married? vain? ugly? cheap? stupid? a Republican?
"We Don't Have To Take Our Clothes Off To Have A Good Time"

Jermaine Stewart
tom: beautiful? delicious? in love with someone else? but i'm liking yours, too. especially "easy."

larry, i gotta go look up who jermaine stewart is. don't you think a quote is more effective if it's from someone a person might actually, um, know?

thanks, angel. nice that someone around here is taking this seriously. well, except me, of course. but thanks for coming by. we're just horsing around here tonight.
Very nice Femme. Very sexy. Hearts in armor, oh my.
jermain stewart, may he rest in peace, died of aids in 1997. i'm guessing he had a whole lot of fun with his clothes off.
Backseat... ok. One night after we had my daughter my husband and I got a babysitter and ended up in the car in the woods behind the house somehow? wait.. did I just reveal that...
oh, god, rita. did you, you lucky woman?? oh, the struggle and the awkwardness and the steamed up windows and ... whew.

and isn't 'hearts in armor' a great song? rips my heart out every time i hear it. actually makes me cry. once i played it over and over and cried from phoenix to the california state line. some damn guy, of course.
Respectable space... hmmm ... Not for long ms. femme.
Love the idea of "music playing in their blood."
nope, scarlett, you could count those respectable seconds on a stopwatch, i'm guessing. it must have been the music. ;;
i fell in love on the dance floor once... true story. loved this.
The art of romance is almost extinct. Thanks for this, femme.
P.S. I liked Jermaine Stewart. The '80's were all about dancing...~r
Standing ovation due here!
Jayzuz, Tom, a Republican??? Thanks for pouring green beer on the romance, boyo. Not sayin' I'd participate, but if an Open Call were to emerge for fiction pieces to guess what "he" thought "she" was, I'd rate and read every entry.
Loved this. Especially the last line!
...runs to open a window...elegant, lean and hot! R
I ran (tease) like a fretting Olympian
on the slow dance floor to see what
a Persistent Muse wrote ...
...
If folk dance slow - dances with a 1/2
pint if Kentucky Rev Elijah Craig's
12- year bourbon aged in oak barrels
in the front trouser pants pocket ...
... stick the behind butt outward ...
`
I though of the missionary position.
The reverend says all otter methods
a grave mortal sin.
Oops. Mei culp ay.
I am heartily sorry?
I am no offending?

I'll say a Hail Merry!
Ah, and have wines!
Ay holy communion!
apology?
Love thy neighbors.
Forgive if they say`
sorry.I offend you.
Then -
We can forgive you.
But,
only if you sincerely,
truly mean - 'sorry'
mmmmmm
with dancing
this is a sweet, beautiful piece of writing...
Hot and sweet. I like hands in hair. I think he always thought she was unavailable for some reason, and knew when they touched that it was all there for him. Sigh.
Ah to that space between belt buckles and then making it disappear!
@Matt
I'm putting out (so to speak) the flame by saying he always thought she was a Republican? You object to that but not to saying he always thought she was a whore? Or are you objecting because that was redundant? (;-)
Lovely, Candace. I read this as I was signing off last night and waited to comment this morning, because I wanted to include a link to a song it reminded me. Here is one I found, I hope you enjoy it. (I'm working on a piece on that topic)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pl-cVgAU8K8
♥R
lorianne, so did i. glad you liked this.

go right ahead, iq. we're all doing it. ;

joan, i danced through the 'eighties. how did i miss JS? too busy being romantic, maybe. ; thanks, kiddo.

algis, thanks! standing up, clapping!

matt, you and tom are cracking me up here. no republicans on that dance floor, i assure you. ;

i'm so glad you did, alysa. thank you!

p. muse, i know. i think it got even steamier after that last line.

art, i love your lines, especially the behind butt and that you're offering a mei culp ay. you're a gem. and i'm all for loving thy neighbors. ;

thanks, brian. mmmmm is my favorite kind of dancing. ;

thank you, gary. i'm glad the sweetness came through.

so do i, ann. and i think you got it exactly right. yes, you did.

roger, the idea i had for this might make me go back to wearing belts, just to hear mine clink against his. thanks!

tom, that would sure put out my flame. the republican part, i mean. i'm gonna steer you back toward 'easy.'

fusun, what a great song "dance me to the end of love" is. thanks for the nudge. there's a line in it -- 'touch me with your naked hand' -- that made my eyes water. whoo!
I agree with Margaret, very nice last line. R
"They fit together like two halves of a locket." So romantic. I love this. -R-
his fingertips on her ribs~

The whole tale told, right there.

All right, femme forte~
Makes me want to horizontal dance.
thanks, sheba. i liked that one, too.

christine, i was trying to work 'hinge' in there, but it just didn't work. can't you just hear that locket click closed? mmm.

catch-22, you got it. that phrase is the story. ;

lea, around here we call that mattress dancing. i better turn the music off or i'll never get any work done today. thanks!
Beautiful imagery and a lot is conveyed with few words. Well done!
Very sexy is right!!!
Romantic fiction=memories or fantasies or hopes for the future?

And I still think you don't look a day over forte.
Headline of the Week, that's for sure.
Romance AND mystery. My favorite combination.
oh my, femme. ***sigh*** I remember a time on the dance floor with a really sexy man, dancing to Marvin Gaye's "Let's Get It On"... I can still feel his warm hand on the small of my back and the slow undulation of his hips.

Whew! Is it hot in here, or what?

I still get butterflies when I remember that one unforgettable dance. Making love standing up, indeed.

RRRRRRRRRRRated.
I loved it when the whole world irised in to just the two of us dancing slow to some sweet ballad. This brought back some very distant memories - pleasant ones.
Patrick Swayze is looking down and smiling!
“I always thought you were …”
I'm trying to come up with the answer.
This was very, very nice Femme,
Ah...very nice indeed! Got me in the mood! r
Lovely! A whole novel in 4 inches of type. Or better, a love song complete with a pang.
Gorgeous. And, I suspect, not completely fiction. Lea and I found out we each used to write for romance magazines, mostly soft core porn, this is even more subtle, but you're our sister for sure.
makes me want to go dancing...

quite lovely and romantic.
You got this so well, how without knowing how, there you are with him dancing. Sigh.
Loved it. I love writerly text. This has got me thinking. R
LUV the eroticness of this. OH the images in my head! LOL. Thank you for sharing. R
you know, I kind of knew this would be a hit, and I'm not surprised at all. It's lovely in every way, not the least of which is what was not said and drawing in every lucky person who came here, striking chords within, spinning off on all our own individual tangents of romance, fragrance memories, pulse touches that meant something or the loss felt in never having any of it. Oh you...
The consummate consummation . . . . That closing line is just wonderful.
A moment you will never forget...
look at all you lovely people who came long after this smoked up the feed on friday. i love smiling at each person's slightly different take, colored by your own experience, your own dances, your own loves.

i've edited it. it's funny how many phrases you thought were important can be left out, leaving what remains clearer than before. what is still true is that she always was.

thank you all for these amazing comments. they make my sunday. now it's time to put on a little music. and maybe dance. ;)
I am a dancer and I like this a lot. Thanks for the perspective and the romance too.
Ohhhhhh.....please keep going and going! "Respectable distance between belt buckles" - just the type of thoughts that run through my head when flirting with possibilities. You capture the feminine essence marvelously.
What a steamy, romantic little slice of life. I've never ever danced like that! Now I know what I've been missing.
yeah, leave it there and let us all gasping for more
And I haven't heard this old favorite song for so long....thank you for the wonderful story and images......The words to this song are pure poetry. Haven't we all put on that armor at one time or another?

Hearts in Armor ~ by Jude Johnstone

One more day my heart's in armor
Though I meant to let you in
In an effort not to harm it
I have missed my chance again

I was singing when I freed you
But my pride was just a veil
I pretended not to need you
Now my heart tells a different tale

And every hour that goes by
The harder I become
Because I let that well run dry
Because I left you unanswered

Then like a fool I kept my secret
When it made no sense to try
Now I can no longer keep it
For it's late and the moon is high

One more day my hearts in armor
Though I did not see it then
I would finish what you started
If I had that chance again

Rrrrrrrrrated.
Oo-wa, femme ... how elegant you make it ...
In my experience romantic literature tends to appeal to men or women but seldom both. What I like about the writing you do of this sort is that it attacts and holds and satisifies both me and the opposite sex. That you can keep men interested without the writing becoming pornographic is testament to an understanding of the male psyche that few women possess.
are you sure you're not a tango dancer?
Ah, a dose of romance, Ms. Forte. Sweet job. Lovely details.

Oh, dancing. How I miss the beauty of that. How simple, how romantic. We need more of it!

Listening to the song now. Great harmonies.
Ah, a dose of romance, Ms. Forte. Sweet job. Lovely details.

Oh, dancing. How I miss the beauty of that. How simple, how romantic. We need more of it!

Listening to the song now. Great harmonies.
Happy Birthday wonderful femme forte - you fill up your name, bring it to life for me in ways that go straight to my heart. I am so glad you are here, so glad to read your wonderful posts, and then to have you read mine! leaving wonderful gifts. Thank you. I celebrate your birth and presence and may it continue long and happy and rich, and with the words to share it all!