“Would you like to dance?”
Her friends were already on the dance floor. She had tucked herself up onto the red Naugahyde booth and was wiping ice sweat off her half-empty glass. She looked up to say no thank you, but his fingers were already curling around her palm, and before she she could speak, she was on the scuffed linoleum and had taken two steps in time to the beat, turning slowly clockwise with him, pausing, moving again.
There was a respectable space between their belt buckles, her elbows tensed, his back straight. Alison was singing a decent cover of Hearts In Armor, like she meant it for someone she’d once loved.
He paused again and moved to lead her in the opposite direction, but she stumbled, stiff, and they lost the rhythm.
“Sorry,” she said as she looked down at her rebellious foot.
“It’s okay,” he smiled, squeezing her fingers and guiding her into a tight circle that drew her against his chest, flattening her breasts against his shirt pockets, his knee between hers. They fit together like two halves of a locket.
She bit her lip and felt his jaw tighten.
He swallowed and said, “I always thought you were …”
“Shhhh,” she said, "it’ll be all right.”
They danced, his fingertips on her ribs and hers in his hair, the music playing in their blood.


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"They danced, his fingertips on her ribs and hers in his hair, the music playing in their blood."
very romantic, that.
thanks, diana. i liked that, too.
I like Fiction Femme.
Wait, what?
jess, so do i!! glad you came by, girl.
robin, you are so right. they could have. and i think they did. ;
truer words were never spoken. there is nothing sexier than slow-dancing. but only if the music isn't crap. then it's time to head for the back seat of the car. wait. how old am i?
Were what!? Enquiring minds want to know!
Loved this
Rated with hugs and
linda, honey, if they put on hallmark what i think these two were gonna do next ... !!!@@!!! whoooo. so sorry you're sick :(
Jermaine Stewart
larry, i gotta go look up who jermaine stewart is. don't you think a quote is more effective if it's from someone a person might actually, um, know?
thanks, angel. nice that someone around here is taking this seriously. well, except me, of course. but thanks for coming by. we're just horsing around here tonight.
and isn't 'hearts in armor' a great song? rips my heart out every time i hear it. actually makes me cry. once i played it over and over and cried from phoenix to the california state line. some damn guy, of course.
Love the idea of "music playing in their blood."
P.S. I liked Jermaine Stewart. The '80's were all about dancing...~r
on the slow dance floor to see what
a Persistent Muse wrote ...
...
If folk dance slow - dances with a 1/2
pint if Kentucky Rev Elijah Craig's
12- year bourbon aged in oak barrels
in the front trouser pants pocket ...
... stick the behind butt outward ...
`
I though of the missionary position.
The reverend says all otter methods
a grave mortal sin.
Oops. Mei culp ay.
I am heartily sorry?
I am no offending?
I'll say a Hail Merry!
Ah, and have wines!
Ay holy communion!
apology?
Love thy neighbors.
Forgive if they say`
sorry.I offend you.
Then -
We can forgive you.
But,
only if you sincerely,
truly mean - 'sorry'
with dancing
I'm putting out (so to speak) the flame by saying he always thought she was a Republican? You object to that but not to saying he always thought she was a whore? Or are you objecting because that was redundant? (;-)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pl-cVgAU8K8
♥R
go right ahead, iq. we're all doing it. ;
joan, i danced through the 'eighties. how did i miss JS? too busy being romantic, maybe. ; thanks, kiddo.
algis, thanks! standing up, clapping!
matt, you and tom are cracking me up here. no republicans on that dance floor, i assure you. ;
i'm so glad you did, alysa. thank you!
p. muse, i know. i think it got even steamier after that last line.
art, i love your lines, especially the behind butt and that you're offering a mei culp ay. you're a gem. and i'm all for loving thy neighbors. ;
thanks, brian. mmmmm is my favorite kind of dancing. ;
thank you, gary. i'm glad the sweetness came through.
so do i, ann. and i think you got it exactly right. yes, you did.
roger, the idea i had for this might make me go back to wearing belts, just to hear mine clink against his. thanks!
tom, that would sure put out my flame. the republican part, i mean. i'm gonna steer you back toward 'easy.'
fusun, what a great song "dance me to the end of love" is. thanks for the nudge. there's a line in it -- 'touch me with your naked hand' -- that made my eyes water. whoo!
The whole tale told, right there.
All right, femme forte~
christine, i was trying to work 'hinge' in there, but it just didn't work. can't you just hear that locket click closed? mmm.
catch-22, you got it. that phrase is the story. ;
lea, around here we call that mattress dancing. i better turn the music off or i'll never get any work done today. thanks!
And I still think you don't look a day over forte.
Whew! Is it hot in here, or what?
I still get butterflies when I remember that one unforgettable dance. Making love standing up, indeed.
RRRRRRRRRRRated.
I'm trying to come up with the answer.
This was very, very nice Femme,
quite lovely and romantic.
i've edited it. it's funny how many phrases you thought were important can be left out, leaving what remains clearer than before. what is still true is that she always was.
thank you all for these amazing comments. they make my sunday. now it's time to put on a little music. and maybe dance. ;)
Hearts in Armor ~ by Jude Johnstone
One more day my heart's in armor
Though I meant to let you in
In an effort not to harm it
I have missed my chance again
I was singing when I freed you
But my pride was just a veil
I pretended not to need you
Now my heart tells a different tale
And every hour that goes by
The harder I become
Because I let that well run dry
Because I left you unanswered
Then like a fool I kept my secret
When it made no sense to try
Now I can no longer keep it
For it's late and the moon is high
One more day my hearts in armor
Though I did not see it then
I would finish what you started
If I had that chance again
Rrrrrrrrrated.
Oh, dancing. How I miss the beauty of that. How simple, how romantic. We need more of it!
Listening to the song now. Great harmonies.
Oh, dancing. How I miss the beauty of that. How simple, how romantic. We need more of it!
Listening to the song now. Great harmonies.