consonantsandvowels

MARCH 31, 2012 1:57PM

some ways of seeing it

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How odd to be here surprised by it,
what was coming, if it came -
as it has so far, so far seeming
like the coyote’s tip-toe lifted -
now the precise shadow of an ACME anvil falling.
   
The desire for zest, for acrid pith,
tearing membrane, the bright acid sweet-oiled orange,
pulp and juice lipped and tongued - to evaporating complacencies
of Sunday morning peignoir meditations on death and beauty
sputtering to a nap in late afternoon.
               
If it isn’t death it’s beauty.  Or beautiful death.
Or the death of beauty. Or deathly beauty.
Or sex.  It’s often sex.
Which is, the urge -  still.                    

 

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Consonant.. "Meditations on death and beauty"...difficult work..Thank you for sharing..Made me think again the fact that i never could understand why Love is called sex...Maybe because it is not love..Maybe...Who knows...Rated..Best regards.
why does this have a noir- ish feel to it? Perhaps the word peignoir which I haven't heard in many years, brings me to an adult world I don't know that our hippie generation ever grasped. Watch the anvil... cool stuff here.
really cool stuff ~
the coyote's tip-toe lifted, the tearing membrane, the surprise of the common and the complex. Howl!
Sputtering to a nap beats that anvil landing on one's unsuspecting head. This thing is bouncing around in my head, from first line/image to last, beautiful thing.
Oh, c&v, oh oh. I could almost read this as a checklist of the things I feel over the course of the day (and night). I hadn't included the coyote, exactly, but he was always one of my favorites. And I guess by now, he's practically a classical allusion.
I guess we all find ourselves wondering about own mortality and as we grow ever closer to it, we begin to see it in different ways, different light ... and yet I imagine we will still be surprised by it.
Thanks all for visiting and sharing your thoughts with me.

STATHI STATHI ~ hmmm....

Rita ~ Maybe the shadow brings the noir, too. That anvil....

catch ~ I'm so glad you liked the tip-toe lifted!

femme ~ Yes the sputtering nap seems preferable, though it lacks that certain frisson...

Divorce Bard ~ I don't know about classical allusion, but those cartoons were burned into my psyche.

Kate ~ Yes. This poem came to me after a conversation with a friend about the surprise - and once you've felt it, it becomes somewhat unrelenting, which is part of the strange confusion of it I think - like you still can't believe what you're seeing.
c&v, seeing is not always believing I suppose. And perhaps neither is feeling it ... I don't know ... but I think not believing is a kind of coping mechanism we have at times ... a protection for ourselves of sorts ... like we just need the time to let something sink in ... process it ... until we get to that place of acceptance.

My very best wishes to those who face such a difficult, shocking and sad time.

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