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L. E. Merithew

L. E. Merithew
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Some may claim I'm in the throes of a midlife crisis. If so, I intend to make the best of it. Plus, being in middle life means I'm heading for a life span somewhere in the range of a century and a half. Cool beans. Meanwhile, the muse whispers, teases, convinces me that I may actually have something to say. Do I? You decide. ************************************* As promised in a recent posting, I have finally modified my avatar. This one was cropped and GIMPed (freeware program similar to Photoshop) from a photo I included in a blog in 2011. ******************************************* As noted in my post of 26 September 2012, I will be expanding my online homes beyond OS. I'll still be here from time to time, but you can follow the links in that post to find me wherever I go. ******************************************* If you wish to share any material on this blog, please secure my permission beforehand. If permission is granted, you'll be asked to provide appropriate attribution with a link back here. I'll do the same in return if possible. ************************************* Unless specifically indicated otherwise, all images and content (c) L. E. Merithew All rights remain with the author unless clearly re-assigned.

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MARCH 31, 2012 10:54AM

For Your Own Good

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     (This is in response to the OS Weekend fiction prompt.  Unfortunately, I wasn't able to include the photo it's based on.  Go to the OS Weekend Fiction Club  to view it.  The first paragraph below hopefully offers enough of a description for those that choose not to follow the link.)

 

          "It's for your own good."  The crustacean at my feet dipped forward, as if nodding to encourage agreement.  It spun on a claw, clattering and chattering toward the grotesque figure in front of me.  It clawed up the motionless creature, leaving bloody pinpricks in its wake.  At the top, it settled in place with a sucking slurp.  The monocranial conjoining came to life.  Its eyes fluttered, stuttered, shuddered, shuttered, shattered.

            "I don't understand," I began.

            It flashed a joyless smile.  Its voice was slick.  "Go ask Alice."

            "Who's Alice?"

            A deep voice came from behind me.  "I'm Alice."

            I turned.  The man's hair was mostly gray, some dark strands still visible.  He began to cry black tears.  "Welcome to my nightmare."  He gestured toward me, offering me something.  I looked down to see he was holding a microphone.  I took it in a trembling, masculine hand.

            I looked back up.  The stage lights were so blinding, I felt a headache forming.  The applause and cheers from the audience had stopped.  The echoes were fading.  I realized they were waiting for me to sing.  I'm not a singer, I thought.

            I glanced back down at the glass of wine in my delicate trembling hand.  The fruity rich liquid threatened to spill out onto the heavy expensive gown I had rented for the presidential reception.

            "Are you in distress, Illiss?"

            I grasped the wine glass with both hands.  Carefully, I placed it on the table next to me.  "Perhaps, Councilor."

            "Might I then suggest a moment to freshen up."  The rotund man gestured to the side, in the general direction of the restrooms.

            "Thank you, Councilor."

            I studied my faces in the mirror.  Garish lipstick on the leftmouth, pale gloss on the rightmouth.  Whatever possessed me to attempt the latest contrast fashion?  My daughter was right – some looks simply didn't agree with me.

            "Are you going to stay in there all night, dear?"  My husband's voices were slurred with drink.

            "One minute more."  If I didn't placate him soon, I knew what would happen next.

            Wrong answer.  The door blasted off its hinges.  I spun as he clutched me with his frontarms.  He used his weight to pin all my arms behind me as he shoved me against the wall. One frontarm roughly grasped my lowbreast.  His reararm tore at the diaphonous blouse I wore.  Another frontaram clawed at my genitalia.

            Some writers have claimed that women feel a moment of exhiliration in situations like this.  I only felt terror.  Terror, simple and naked, just as I was now naked before the foul man seeking to destroy me.  "Hold still," his mouths breathed, reeking of stale vomit and smoke.  One fronthand reached for my lefttemple.

            His faces morphed into those of the clinic doctor.

            "Really, Eh-Loes, you must relax."  He removed the last electrode.  "Fighting only makes it worse."

            "Why?"

            "Why the treatment?"

            I tried to nod, but my heads were clamped in place.

            "I explained before.  The government has required all citizens to undergo therapy.  So many are leftbrain dominate.  We've been ordered to help them enter their rightminds."  His lefthead shook morosely at a display above me.  "Truth is, only about one percent can become priveleged enough to lead this egalitarian society of ours."  His fronthands adjusted some unseen dials.  I heard them click.  "The government requires us to find and help that one percent."

            "The rest?"  My throat was raw.

            He looked himself in the eyes.  "We do what we can, if we have time."  He began re-attaching the electrodes.  His voices were increasingly discordant.  "Please try to relax.  It's for your own good."

                       

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L.E,a Leftbrained here...."He looked himself in the eyes.."

What an excellent and ρowerful situation you described..Looking yourself in the eyes..Can I;Υοu made me wander..

It is a kind of Orwell's 1984 here...Control of thoughts and Cookoo nest...all together..

Here in Greece we have an old song...it is called.."For my good"..And it goes.."For my good,for my good,untill my mind couldn't have enough...and I am in room number 9..in detention..so as to find my self..But I have a knife hidden...For my good.."Your work brought to my memory such a great song.

If one has not read this..is for his/her lost..Excellent work...not excellent in the described reality..sorry for saying but situations like these not even as nightmare should exist...But excellent in meanings and writing..Made me fear,think,remember...know..Rated with thanks and best regards,L.E.
Thank you for your comments, Stathi. Originally, I was thinking in a humorous vein, but sometimes my muse has other ideas. I just put her words down as best I can.
You very successfully convey that shifting feeling of a nightmare of realities morphing into other realities. The irony is the reality is worse, or as bad, as the nightmare. R
Funniest, most ironic line: "My daughter was right – some looks simply didn't agree with me." My lefthead was laughing black tears.
R
Creepy and ironic. Go ask Alice! Spill the wine!
Is there an over-fed, long-haired leaping gnome onstage too?

r
I had this exact dream years ago! My therapist said I was crazy.
That's my story and I'm sticking to it!
R
Ahhhhh! Creepy and bizarre in all the right ways. Very "Twilight Zone"; very Weird Tales. Just as things start to focus, whoosh, you take us off in another direction. Certainly this story captures the essence of madness and one of the horrors to which it leads: confinement and "treatment." Oh, no! I hear them coming . . .
I'll try to respond to all your comments.

@Gerald: Over the weekend, I realized that I have some other unfinished pieces that explore a similar concept. A recurring theme in my work? Could be.

@ASH: Until I read your comment, I didn't realize the irony of that line. Guess it proves that even an author doesn't always see the full depth of what he wrote. Thanks.

@V. Corso: Another subconscious connection. I had to look up the reference before I answered. At first, I had trouble placing the line. I remember the song now, but wasn't thinking of it when I wrote this piece. Things just seem to get more and more delicious. Glad you brought it to my attention.

@Out on a limb: I just got back from talking to my own therapist. She said pretty much the same thing. ;-)

@Seth James: Now that you mention it, maybe I should have included Napoleon XIV (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hnzHtm1jhL4&feature=related)

To sum up, when I wrote this, it felt like it connected on so many levels more than my usual work. I wasn't sure if that would translate to others. You've shown me that it resonated even more than I imagined. Thank you all!
Very captivating. You have a wonderfully unique talent. rated
As I was reading, I was thinking, how other-worldly. It makes me wonder what goes on in that mind of yours.:)
You could write for "Twilight Zone". rated
@Fay: Thank you for your comments. In a younger time, I grew up on "Twilight Zone" and "Outer Limits" (among others.) In fact, one of my earliest posts was a take-off/follow-up on a Twilight Zone episode (episode title "To Serve Man"; my response - for a Foodie Tuesday no less - was "Should I Have Killed My Dinner?")

There are times where my muse insists on looking at life from the most off-center perspective available. Sometimes it even works out OK. ;-)